Everyone gets revived (enemies included), plus all the enemies sudden become good guys and help the same people they are trying to kill one minute ago, it finishes like a children's movie

Spider Troupe = Chameleon Troupe

Both are the most wanted criminal groups in their respective series having more or less around 12 members with powerful abilites.

Greed Island = Tower of Wish

Both are mysterious IRL game that will grant rewards to anyone who completes the challenges.

Chimera Ant = Monster King Orden

Both monsters are main antagonists from their respective arc who have the ability to give birth army of chimera each with different genetic makeup.

MC: Honest, Kind, Help others, Justice - <Useless>

Romance- Confirmed

MC care too much, like really too much about future plot. to the point, he don't even want benefit or anything which can change the future plot. example- if I take that, then future villain won't have weapon, why is this agent who was supposed to be with MC is here? I shouldn't take MC or any character chance.....

i am really fed up with this passive beta cucko MC [ cucko was just for my anger lol ]

Read chp 19 - you will know that author is making this MC a super beta. Girls bully him, but he will save them [ which will happen in future, ig you can also imagine such things ]

Read chp 23- MC is too kind. He view this novel world as a real world, even when he has enough evidence that this is a fake world and he is pushed in it by some almighty presence.

So this MC is ultra-beta who cares too much about justice.

in end.

co author came and told him, "What a great story, time to go back to your world". He said no, and co author took all his power. He remained in the world powerless, cohabiting with the 2 women.

He was weak even till end. For example, original MC can easily beat the shi* outta him.

Oh, and nobody remembers him. Only one woman, then the other remembers him too.

Co author deleted everyone's memory of him

My rating> 0/5

Unless you want a beta MC who hide behind MC till the end. And in end, loose everything. Then don't read it.

Due to co-author being an a**hole, 99% of the power he gained was taken away and all the connections he built with the characters were erased because they all lost their memory.

Sir, you are a being with the power to create a world and you can’t f*cking cut the poor sap some slack? You literally dragged him down from a higher dimension and threw him into this world where he built a life. And then you took it all away? For f*cking what?Maybe there was a reason but it wasn’t compelling enough to convince me because I finished this book like 2 days ago and I already can’t remember. I don’t know, it just left a bad taste in my mouth.

As usual, the beginnings are always great, the preamble sold me out with the idea of an Author falling into his work, it hooked me up since the start, and on top of it finding out that someone modified his history was an even biggest Plot Twist on the very first Chapter. He has to earn Story Points (SP) to raise his skill and abilities in a Game Like Powers, the more fame he gets, the more SP he earns, and the stronger he becomes. Also, he can create skill and abilities tailored at his will.

Sadly as many rare novelties around, this one as well blew up on the development of it, and with time, all fell into a shadow of what it was in the early chapters. Moreover, unless you decide to let yourself to fall into the "Sunk Cost Fallacy", or if you are of those who like to end whatever they start reading, you will find yourself being unable to continue the reading until the end.

There were things I did not like with the Novel, so while I was reading I was taking notes of those, which will make this review larger and with many spoilers.

The first thing that I dislike even from the start is that the MC (the Author Character) still wanted to preserve the status and standing of every other character in the Novel. He doesn't see himself as the MC of it, which is s*upid since everyone else but HIM are NPCs, and he needs the fame to earn SP, if you consider that the Original Novel was a failure he should have taken the Role of MC, forget everyone else, and let those NPCs burn. Earning lot of SP would have skyrocketed to the top faster and finish his predicament ASAP.

MC wastes too much time talking and babbling with the MCs, instead of focusing on his things. He claims to be an extra, but he IS NOT, since he meddles with the same MC of the Novel, giving items and information from the standpoint of an Ally, not an EXTRA.

Giving a Virtual Game Plot to a Novel within a Novel? Seriously Author? (Real Life one). At this point, the "Real Life Author" ran out of ideas, and is making his "Author MC" play virtual reality games, throwing out the ship what this everything is about since the beginning. On top of it, he doesn't use his name, knowing that fame will earn him SP.

The best part of the Novel are the moment where the MC fights, at first he is supposed to look OP, but then he don't act like it, since he wants the other Characters to shine, when he KNOWS he gets more points for being in the limelight. He got a Bullet Time Ability and an Ability to destroy Magic Shield, so he virtually should be invincible, and able to kill anyone, but he does not do it. You see MC performing Bullet Time, then he start thinking on things, filling half chapter of ideas and actions he could do, and then the time runs out and he does nothing. It seems that the "Real Life Author" noticed how broken this was, and decided to nerf it, making it useless VS other strong people, but nice to kill large number of monsters.

He wastes times on useless abilities like singing, for a school contest and many other skills that doesn't nothing but convolute the chapters with a lot of text and useless skill that gives meager points to slow down the character power grown (RL Author doesn't want MC to be OP)

Once the MC leaves the Academy everything turns worse, MC does not like to show himself knowing that fame gives him lots of Story Points (SP), the skill points her gets is too few, something like 0.001-0.004 making his abilities progress slowly. Author was trying to milk the history for hundreds of chapters, where it would have ended in less than 100 if you remember the original premise.

Tower Arc was horrible, it was a power up place that the MC did not need, and forked for nothing as chapter milking. It only works because you see the MC picking useless skill and leveling up weird skills, instead of farming SP and create powerful skills like the Sharpshooter one.

After that so much Skip and Skim and in the end nothing worth mentioning...

I do have one big flaw with this novel which is that it isn't well paced. Like someone else said, after the first 100 chapters with the school arc, the author just seems to be rushing. I don't like it. When kim hajin left the academy to join the Chameleon Troupe, that was a great opportunity to develop his abilities, create motivation for his friends and flesh out characters. The story could've alternated between the perspective of kim hajin in life threatening situations as a mercenary, and his friends still in the academy, showing the gap getting bigger. Honestly, the author had no right to use a 3 year time skip. One piece (manga) went 100s of chapters after all the characters were fleshed out before using the time skip to grow stronger. This is unacceptable and is what prevents TNE from being a masterpiece.