MC is making heads of powerful figures from both sides literally explode, just by publishing his research papers! XD

For LOTM readers, you can basically think of it as a novel where Klein had Roselle’s golden finger (memories/information from the modern world) in a world where magic is science.

I feel like there were a plot holes in the middle to later half of the novel. When MC and FL were being chased through the alternate world by a legendary sorcerer, they definitely should have died. It doesn’t have logical sense even if the legendary was underestimating them that they survived as a senior sorcerer and radiant knight. Maybe for the first time they duped the legendary, but after that the legendary should have widened up and dealt with them quickly. Like the MC pointed out later in the novel, Legendaries aren’t s*upid.

Sometimes I feel like the conflict is being forced. Ex. When MC is in the Realm of Gates and being chased by God’s Eye (or something), he was about to be killed and his item reacted and made God’s Eye realize his true identity that was buried under brainwashing (basically). Why was the item only activated when the MC was about to die? If it was activated based on God’s Eyes proximity with the MC, it should have activated when they met. If not, then what factor caused the item to react late? This was never explored or explained. Either way, I think that if the item is supposed to react, it should’ve reacted at the very start of their meeting instead of after they’ve had an intense battle. Otherwise, especially since there’s no explanation, it just feel like a way to put the MC in a dangerous but meaningless and avoidable situation.

I’m not one to dislike a novel just because it has romance in it. And the romance in TMA isn’t bad, but that’s the problem (?) I have with it. In the first half of the novel, the FL was very strong and a great character. The relationship between the two makes sense and her character was 3D. However, in the latter half of the novel, I feel like she... grayed out? Like, she used to be a character that was fun and full of colors, but she just started washing out. I’m okay with the fact that her role (main tank/damage dealer/frontline) changed (tank, sub damage dealer, more backline) as the MC became more and more strong and surpassed her. This is a logical adjustment now that the MC is stronger than her. However, it’s the rest of it that I don’t like. Outside of combat, I feel like the FL turned into a ‘why’ machine. She basically became a tool for the author to use to explain the MC’s actions and the mechanisms behind stuff and nothing more. It’s the comparison between the fist half FL and the second half FL that I find tragic.

- I thought Lucien would change s*x, just to get Natasha, Thank God he stayed firm XD, when it was about to happen the first time, I was seriously thinking about dropping the work if he used the belt just for that, because in my opinion it would be a lot of lack of self-love if he accepted such a situation.

- The Religious footprint in the WN was well done, practically a Catholic + Protestant Church and later an Anglican Church, the base that the author used was very pleasant, of course it is an exaggerated view of religion, but it was in a good footprint, since that the work is very Scientist, the author is forced to give an "extreme" tone to religion, for you to see Sorcerers as "nice", until you read what Sorcerers did at the time of the Empire, and then you think: " There's no way to defend, the guys dug their own grave".