would ve been nice if there would be more trauma after the dungeon. I mean he should at least have trust issues that that is the real life world, no? I see more suffering potential hahaha

I kinda disliked that MC didn’t explain to inhunter what happened.

I rlly liked their personality combo snd the development.

As the intro stated, MC was trapped in a dungeon and had to escape in 24 hours. Within the dungeon, MC got to see the future if he hadn't been trapped in the dungeon. He would've died the next day, everyone would've been happy except for ML. ML would mourn at his funeral and drowned with his ashes in a river. MC wasn't aware of ML's feelings.

The dungeon also sent him back to the "past" when MC and ML were children and in school together. MC did not remember ML but used this dream to get to know ML and encourage him to be better.

MC used to be kind and carefree but he changed when his parents died and he was ab*sed by his relatives. He lived in poverty and became mentally ill. ML had been waiting and waiting for MC to get better.

The experience in the dungeon made MC realize that he loved ML and it also helped him to discover ML's love for him.

SPOILER...

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ML was a thief when he was younger. He was forced into it by his circumstances and thought he was no good. ML was going to kill himself. However, MC unknowingly saved ML that day through his kindness and encouragement. ML resolved then to live well and do good.

He had searched for MC and worked hard to make money for MC... hoping that MC will go back to his original self. MC was ML's reason for living. This is why ML had killed himself when MC died.

like there's a chapter about people commenting how horrible the MC is. I know it's important to show it, but I don't think it needed a whole long chapter.

He's not even a hunter and he was almost able to clear a whole dungeon (I mean it was a solo person dungeon, but still) by himself, through his intelligence, ingenuity, and sheer willpower.

the yandere vibes that he gave off at certain points in his POV threw me off-guard lol. I was expecting a pure ML! But I really should have known! I mean, this author wrote that other novel!

go all sappy and declare their love for each other got to a point that it was, to me, almost... no longer in-character? It was a bit unrealistic for me, given what I know of them. I do like them being sweet to each other--the moderate amount of sweet, not the cloying ugh amount! Like, the special extra has a moderate amount of sweet.

the reality show, the articles, people's comments on social media/communities, and all that. Whenever reality shows are inserted in these BLs they are always enjoyable to read.